**REPORT OF A FUTURE TRIP**

*MY ENGLISH COMPETENCE IN 2010*

Hello,then I would show my English level,and I want to do it putting here the links of my best oral evidence and my best written evidence,which I have chosen from that were on my blog of first and second batchillerat.Later I want to explain why I chose these,and why these evidence are my best works.

Here we have the links:

ORAL EVIDENCE

http://alexandraportfoliobtx.blogspot.com/2009/06/social-essay.html


WRITTEN EVIDENCE:I have chose two,one for the maturity of the content,and one for the strucure.

http://alessandraenglish2bb.blogspot.com/2010/03/racism-from-my-point-of-view.html

http://alessandraenglish2bb.blogspot.com/2010/05/discussion-essay.html

I have chose the oral evidence of I do in 2008,because this year I don't do a decent oral presentation,and in my last oral evidence I preferred to put images and not film myself.Moreover,I think that this presentation is the better,because my fluency and pronuntation aren't so bad,and the day when I have do this,I am quiet and happy.

Respect to the election of the written documents,I have chose one your-say that I like so much for the content,for the topic,and I think that it's a good example to show the level of maturity which I can use in my English writtens,and also I have chose my last discussion essay,the same that I have choose to show my English progress,because it is well organize,with a correct expressions and variety of words,and is a good example of my capabilities.


NOW I FINISH MY BLOG,BUT NOT MY PROCES OF LEARNING,THAT ENDURED EVER.

**MY ENGLISH PROGRESS FROM 2008-2010:

Here I want to compare my first written document,whit my last written document,and my first oral presentation with the last.

Respect the differences between the two writings,I have choose my first discussion essay in comparation with my last discussion essay,and there we can see these documents:


*FIRST DISCUSSION ESSAY*2008

WHAT ABOUT BEING A FAMOUS PERSONAL?
At the moment every person wants to be a famous person,but there are advantages and disadvantages(you know for all the people,your good ways,and you're bads actions too).On the one hand,you have too much money and all the people want to know you,but on the other hand,anybody tell you the truth,people are false because you are famous,and you don't have friends.In realithy it is better to be normal and have a good live,with the real love from people you love,that being famous and being crazy without friends.My own opinion is that being famous is a superficial live,because you must have different lifes!!

*LAST DISCUSSION ESSAY*2010

**Should human rights be enforced by law or optional?

Lately,there is a discussion about if is necessary the law to force the people to respect the human rights,and there are different view of this topic,some of them support the issue and some of them go against this.

On the one hand,the argument for this law enforced,is that in this way all the people have the same treatment in front of the law,and this means that corruption will be nearly impossible,consequently,all the people who want's to attack of any variant way the human rights,thinks in it ten times before do it.Therefore,these temptates decrease very much.Other reason relationed whit this,is that mentally ill persons or persons with very bad intentions from natural,cannot save themselves easily,rather they cannot save.

On the other hand,the argument against this law enforced,is that in some cases,the "life" put people in danger situations,and this is way sometimes good people are forced to do something against the human rights law,for save themselves or somebody.If it happens,who has committed an offense against this law,should be apologize of their acts,and with this law enforced,it's impossible.

So,I would say that there are much reasons for enforced this law,than against enforced it,and I think that it is a complicate decision to get,however I believe it's better if this is optional.


*VOCABULARY:
However:No obstante,de todos modos,sin embargo...

Well,we can see at first moment that my first discussion is very very short in comparation with the last,and that the structure is so better in the last document,because in the first,the presentation of the topic,the arguments for and before,and the conclusions,are in the same short paragraph.Instead,the last document is well structured ,because the paragraphs are good organize:each paragraph has it's idea.The lenguage also is better,for example the expressions to began each sentence or paragraph,or to express contrast,or add ideas (like that,so ,therefore,this means that,however,moreover,another reason is,on the one hand,on the other hand,etc...).Finally we can see that the content of the last discussion and the words in general are better,more variety of words,more maturity ,and that we have learnt some new words with a vocabulary.



Between my first and my last oral presentation,I can`t see much difference,because in the last I have put images and not film myself,but I can hear that my pronuntation are a little better,not so much,because this year I have not participated much in class,but a little yes.Here we have te two presentations: